Potted life

Like a potted plant
Life emerges secure,
Taken too seriously, life
Seems affected,
Stifling, incapable of rising.

It falls then on one,
To weed out stray thoughts
And prune the unformed.

The lure of life escapes none
Triviality of which
Is clear, at thought of firm demise.

It falls then on one,
To move with shifty time
That erases the stinging pain,
Mounting, at the felt absence of life.

Grounded in values, yet
Elaborate rites seem
Tiresome, forcing out, yet again
Placid memories elapsed.

Tender years, Monstrous roots,
Upturns and climaxes
Shattering the pot,
Leaving pieces of frailty within grasp.

Comments

Jermy Joe said…
well........what can i comment on this poem....."the love of a daughter to her father....filled in every word in the poem"......and to be true the literature....hard to digest lol

jermy
ReNiThEr said…
so....i guess anyone can relate to this poem irrespective of who theve become..every word true as daylight in theyre lives..
good one jumbo..
just hope i got it right.
Anonymous said…
Some lines, does touch - know not where, know not how - but it does - and leaves a kind of twitch unexplained.

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